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Delta40
11-27-2010, 07:30 PM
I am your smiley
as you cool in my cul-de-sac
laid flat on a crosstitch blanket
my grandmother made.
My yellowness will blush red
as I slip off the oversized shoes
I wear in my mind.
You can flog a dead horse
till your teeth come loose.
My smiley will waggle a finger
at the side of my head
as I hope you boil inwardly
when old love parades topless
past dried up creek beds.
Wiggle like a banana for me
underneath broken bridges
where you have carved up hearts
with spoons and tender kisses.
I will bang my head against a tree
as I watch you sleep naked,
helpless.
Autumn leaves weave your shroud
in our fenced off forest.
I wave a flag and play no pity
when you are roused
by the alluring heat song of another
while I stand at the perimeter
and toe-tap in time.

Jerrybaldy
11-27-2010, 07:55 PM
I recognised some of the smileys there, the yellow going red, the dancing banana, but felt beneath, something less smiley.
One of your best Delta
IMHO (copyright Bar22 I think)
cheers
JerryB

Delta40
11-27-2010, 07:58 PM
:nopity:

:toetap05::toetap05:don't forget these!

:out:
:brickwall
:beatdeadhorse5:
:toetap05:

Hawkman
11-28-2010, 07:46 AM
There are some wonderful expressions in this, Delta. I particularly liked:

"Wiggle like a banana for me
underneath broken bridges
where you have carved up hearts
with spoons and tender kisses."

There is such humour in your frustated angst - lol.

Live and be well, H

PrinceMyshkin
11-28-2010, 08:45 AM
I loved the way this flirted between the naive silliness of the smileys, and the raunchy double entendres!

Delta40
11-28-2010, 08:53 AM
Thanks Prince. It was nice of you to see that.

hillwalker
11-28-2010, 09:09 AM
Who would thing some silly litle cartoon faces could inspire such an erotically charged piece - a brilliant twist on their use and abuse. I will never look at one the same way ever again.

H

Delta40
11-28-2010, 05:12 PM
lol. There is a mingle of the two. I don't know why I wrote this way

yuka
11-29-2010, 07:18 AM
airy and smart writing, :)
love