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Jerrybaldy
11-20-2010, 09:50 PM
People who are helpless
gift to you the beauty
of being able to help.
People unloved
gift to you the chance
of loving them.
The unloved,
the helpless,
are giving to you.
I hope
you are giving more back.
GEETASHREE
11-21-2010, 03:20 AM
Wonderful thought and words!
tailor STATELY
11-21-2010, 03:58 AM
I found your sentiment quite spiritual (or abounding in humanity if you prefer).
The last verse "I hope you are giving more back." to my mind needs a little work.
Something along the lines of: May those who are able give back.
I check back Monday with another thought or two.
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor STATELY
blazeofglory
11-21-2010, 05:56 AM
People who are helpless
gift to you the beauty
of being able to help.
People unloved
gift to you the chance
of loving them.
The unloved,
the helpless,
are giving to you.
I hope
you are giving more back.
There is plenty of susbtance in your poem and what you wrote is the philosophy of life and Of course that is how the world runs and we run after it
Haunted
11-22-2010, 11:48 AM
I love a warm and fuzzy peom!
Maryd.
11-23-2010, 12:03 AM
A strong message in this one.
Well done again, my friend.
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