Show Me

[Delta40]

Teach me
a parable between dull domesticity
and your unchaste appetite
that we may chain our reason to a post.

Touch me
as if I will be yours today and ever
on your path of inseparable need
to fields of arousal.

Bewilder me
with heady urgings
and tangled webs of eroticism.
Weave bonds that I might never escape from.

Tease me
till I am at your beck and call
where I dare to seal your affection
through yielding devotion.

Breach me
for better or for worse
with your dark, shadowy nature
as it tantalizes my need for release.

Feed me
with your own life force
to sustain that beggardom
which yearns then earns its reward.

Take me
to the pinnacle of my true worth
Thrust to the ultimate moment
that gushes the seeds of mankind,
over and over again.

Leave me
to soak in the soppy residue
of your hedonistic desire,
my self-fulfilled prophesy -
the sum parts of our rapacious seducement.

[zoolane]

Hmm not sure I will come back to it.

[Jerrybaldy]

A dark analysis of the nature of relationships Delta. As in a previous posting of yours, the first line of each stanza connect and tell the story in shorthand at the same time. The complexity of your mind is compelling reading.

[PrinceMyshkin]

I felt a bit of whiplash in response to that last verse where the bitterness that came out seemed in excess of the hints at her involvement in this Dionysian relationship. Having been a party to every previous orgiastic stage, I thought I was owed a how-where-why-when did she change her mind, or have it changed for her.

The structure, of course, is compelling.