Etched On Your Page of Life

[kittypaws]

A character etched on your page of life
Sketched in infinity with grace
Things we lived and thoughts we shared
All are buried there.

Erase me from your soul;
Only a smudge on a page.
You can not remove what I have placed
Love can not be erased..

Unlike paper that disintegrates
My love will never die.
Paper may fly away
But I will always remain.

kittypaws

[hillwalker]

Some nice imagery here - not terribly original, but an elegant piece of poetry.
My only quibble would be the contradiction - are you indeed embossed on the page, or a smudge?

H

[Jerrybaldy]

There are parts of your poetry that remind me of the much missed Ang. Maybe you are Ying to his Ang :D
Jerry