My Last Confession

[DTLangers]

Hello,

I'm new to the forums and would love to share my first completed short story with you. It is about a man who believes his wife is cheating on him and his increasing paranoia at what and who she is with. I've got it up on hubpages, just so if you click on the ads it generates some money for me.

I really hope you like it,

http://hubpages.com/hub/My-Last-Confession

[DTLangers]

Just to clarify, this really isn't spam or a virus or anything. I'm trying to use hubpages to generate income as a freelance writer and they look negatively on duplicate content - hence my link rather than embedded story.

I really would love to hear any feedback on my short story if you guys have any.

Thanks,

Dave