Sigh...In Love

[kittypaws]

Stuck in love with someone,
Whom I may never touch.
Deep into their inner self
Is where I am.
Loving, holding, caring,
Bearing their cross you may say.
Buried in a love with such a brilliant lust
But honestly…
It is just love of your self.

kittypaws

[Beautifull]

Cute. The love of oneself, right?

[YesNo]

I suspect love is seeing oneself in the other person and even seeing the other person within. Touching need not ever occur.

[Pensive]

Ultimately everything points towards selfishness... :)

[PrinceMyshkin]

It's one of the hardest things, isn't it: offering what we believe to be unselfish love; but on the other hand, suspecting the possible self-centeredness of it?

[Beautifull]

Ultimately everything points towards selfishness... :)

That is so true. Even when you love someone, you still have to say, "I"

[Scheherazade]

Even though I like the idea behind the lines, I think they are full of cliches as a result of which, I believe, they fail as a poem.