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PrinceMyshkin
11-16-2010, 08:58 AM
November 13, 2010

Mandela’s sister
was released from house arrest.

But we’ll speak no politics here.

Instead, let’s think about a flower
deprived of sun, of rain,
but which flourished nonetheless.

Haunted
11-16-2010, 12:01 PM
Prince, the way you handle the subject is extraordinary. The flower image of perseverance invokes so much metaphysical beauty.

DieterM
11-16-2010, 12:26 PM
Short and concise, your poem speaks not only of the topic at hand (at least for me) but also of something else. I read the Aung San Suu Kyi poem yesterday and was flabbergasted I wasn't allowed to say how beautiful I found it. Could it be that you, dear prince, by writing this little gem (obviously as politic as the Aung San Suu Kyi piece), wanted to make a statement? If so, I thank you. If not, I apaologize for over-analyzing. And I ask an impertinent little "besides" question: is it possible to be un-politic in anything we say or do anyway?

Haunted
11-16-2010, 12:37 PM
I read the other poem too but didn't understand it. Now I looked at Prince's, I don't see any hidden agenda politics wise, just a piece about a political figure (which can be anyone, an injured athlete, a fallen celeb...) who Prince uses to emphasize how resilient the human spirit is, amidst universal human suffering.

AuntShecky
11-16-2010, 02:12 PM
Interesting. I had heard of Winnie, his second wife, but I never thought of Mandela's siblings before, so I looked it up via "Google." (Every bit of information on the Web is completely accurate, don't you know.)

This webpage looks useful though:
http://womenshistory.about.com/od/peace/tp/nobel_peace_prize_women.htm

I think that this particularly piece could be fleshed out with some more details, even biographical information. Even though we aspiring writers would like to strike a universal chord, in this piece, as it stands now, the focus is a tad generic.

PrinceMyshkin
11-16-2010, 02:32 PM
Interesting. I had heard of Winnie, his second wife, but I never thought of Mandela's siblings before, so I looked it up via "Google." (Every bit of information on the Web is completely accurate, don't you know.)

This webpage looks useful though:
http://womenshistory.about.com/od/peace/tp/nobel_peace_prize_women.htm

I think that this particularly piece could be fleshed out with some more details, even biographical information. Even though we aspiring writers would like to strike a universal chord, in this piece, as it stands now, the focus is a tad generic.

Mandela's "sister" in the sense of their analogous personal history.

hack
11-16-2010, 05:08 PM
It made me think of Lori Berenson,
and "sister" in the broader sense of
the term. As you know, I am often
fer from the mark...peace...

PrinceMyshkin
11-18-2010, 04:24 PM
It made me think of Lori Berenson,
and "sister" in the broader sense of
the term. As you know, I am often
fer from the mark...peace...

Thanks, Hack. As I tried to indicate in the response just above this, there are several kinds of sisterhood.

Jerrybaldy
11-19-2010, 01:54 PM
But only one type of manhood and that's where all kinds of trouble begins :)

Nice analogy Prince.
JerryB

Haunted
11-19-2010, 02:12 PM
But only one type of manhood and that's where all kinds of trouble begins :)


ha. Admittance of guilt is a good step forward :D

qimissung
11-20-2010, 09:56 AM
A beautiful thought for a beautiful lady. Thanks for noting a passage that should not go unremarked.

PrinceMyshkin
11-20-2010, 04:03 PM
Thanks, JerryB, Haunted and Qimissung.

_Shannon_
11-21-2010, 07:39 PM
LOVE it! You really nailed this one!

web_spider4
11-22-2010, 12:52 AM
This is one of my favorites from you, Prince!

A lovely piece. The simplicity in it is beautiful and grabbed my attention immediately.

Fantastic job!

jajdude
11-22-2010, 03:06 AM
I like it.:seeya:

PrinceMyshkin
11-22-2010, 10:32 AM
Thanks, _Shannon_, Web Spider, Jajdude.