Conversation's Dead

[Revolte]

Conversation's dead,
it left last year in a pool of triumphs and failures
and now,
I listen to my own songs
to hear my own voice
because the others have gone to bed,
tonight
and forever on.

[PrinceMyshkin]

Marvellous - and sad - economy!

[DieterM]

Seems so easy and obvious, besides being well written, and still I know that little pearls like this one are the most difficult to write!

[Hawkman]

Good one, Revolte. - H

[aliengirl]

Conversation's dead,


This is exactly what is on my mind these days. Why? I don't know. I really need someone to talk about a hundred things.

Anyway, great poem! You said a lot in so few words.

[Jerrybaldy]

It sounds lonely and I hope you are not. The opening two lines are particularly strong.
BW
JB

[Revolte]

Yup, I love you guys lol.