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ryandyson
11-14-2010, 03:15 PM
I slip, flick a golden arrow off the
sun in a land-slick people tearing down the
coast she's a porceline poem with a rose glass
eye run sweet black river to a sewn up
heart cuts a line with her voice right through the
world she’s a river of tears
rolling down the coast



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zoolane
11-14-2010, 04:29 PM
I like last two lines are wonderful wrote.

zoolane
11-14-2010, 05:03 PM
I slip, it flicks a golden arrow off the
sun in a land-slick people tearing down the
coast she's a porceline poem with a rose glass
eye run sweet black river to a sewn up
heart cuts a line with her voice right through the
world she’s a river of tears rolling down the
coast a bermese love slick floods the world


http://www.aspharpoetry.blogspot.com/

Sorry I like the lasted two lines before it was edited

ryandyson
11-14-2010, 05:20 PM
Thanks Zoo - I agree! x

zoolane
11-14-2010, 05:23 PM
Your very welcome glad to be of service x.

Scheherazade
11-14-2010, 07:07 PM
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