The weight of friendship

[Delta40]

My personal space
is crammed full
by the sheer size
of your obese aura

It is larger than your own
abused body
It emanates themes of
proud morbidity

It snuffs out hope
that dwells in the eyes
of good hearted folk
as it grinds light into dust

It pollutes the places
in my mind
where I skip and jump
It crushes my freedom

My mouth is pulled down
by its heaviness
Happiness scuttles under the table
each time you visit.

[PrinceMyshkin]

I'm sorry to say that there's more rant in this than there is music or interesting language.

[Delta40]

You could be right but it needed to be said.

[Jerrybaldy]

It smelt of poetry to me, particularly your closing lines and as one not unaccustomed to a good rant, I salute you :D