Again and Question.

[zoolane]

Again.

How can this is happened again to someone I love.
It just replay of 15 years early but different names.
I wish I could sweep up her pain and emotion distress.
Put on different planet with fire and brimstone.


Question
I confused of how to feel.
What do I said.
My head spinning with questions.
I will stand and be here for her always.
Why didn't she tell me first instead of him.
I can be trust, I am your best friend.

[PrinceMyshkin]

These are moving indications of your caring for this friend of yours. I'm guessing she has already benefitted from your feelings for her and that she might get more of that of she read these two poems.

[zoolane]

It actual about my daughter best friend.

[zoolane]

The Ginger Beast.

The beast has come alive for thousand time.
Very time the beast is buried deep under ground.
He poke hes finger through the dirty.
Push himself up right.
With great force and cunning grin.
Sly look of 'I am here again'.
The finger point at me.
The flash of ginger hair.
Suddenly wake me from this nightmare.

[Delta40]

I like the implications of the Ginger Beast, Zoo. As Prince says, your caring concern is apparent in the first two poems.

[hillwalker]

I'm guessing there is some link between your memory of 'The Ginger Beast' and your daughter's friend's traumatic experience. It is gut-wrenching to try to imagine what these two poems might be about yet you write with an almost clinical detachment - a voice of reason and calm.

'I wish I could sweep up her pain' - we all share that feeling, I'm sure.

H

[zoolane]

Thank you for comment, Prince, Delta and Hill.

I glad to said that this time it was handle property and not sweep under carpet.

The Ginger Beast refer to a flashback had while ago also it necessity of dream.

[zoolane]

Apple Green.

The glint of light hit it bald patch.
Apple green on the walls.
As I stare in crease of wall were it meet the ceiling.
Concentrate hard as I can.
In hope incident would be over.
Which seem to take forever.
The coldest of the paw.
Would hurry up leave my skin.
Cunning grin that laughing with the sound of evil.
In the skin of human with freckles to match.
It release me from this grip.
I can stop staring at apple green crease now.

[Delta40]

Apple Green is very powerful Zoo, especially after reading Ginger Beast. The detail of the wallpaper during 'incident' makes it all the more frightening.

[Jerrybaldy]

Apple green. While I am unsure of its story, you portray the sinister within, very well.
cheers
Jerry

[zoolane]

Thank you to all comments I am sorry there dark and not everyone cup of tea.
The beginning is the end.

The beginning is the end of my sanity.
In the beginning it starts with subtle words.
The whispering in the ear.
The mind try to translate it into English.
English words sparkle at host of memories.
The memories bring out the dark clouds.
The clouds are suffocate me.

[Delta40]

Can I check whether you meant

The beginning is the end of my sanity rather than insanity?

[zoolane]

Can I check whether you meant

The beginning is the end of my sanity rather than insanity?

Yep you right thank you for spot mistaken

[Delta40]

I like the line the beginning is the end of my sanity. It suggests that right from the start we are doomed. It is not one event that seals our fate and destiny plays a bigger hand than we might know, which is, of course all very depressing. It makes good poetry when you're in that frame of mind Zoo. Don't visit the dark side too often though!

[hillwalker]

'The beginning is the end' is certainly one of your more original pieces because there's a clever structure to it - the repetition of key words/phrases from the end of one line to the beginning of the next from lines 4 onwards. It shows a good deal of subtlety at work.

H