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jajdude
11-08-2010, 09:21 PM
There's comfort in the old
Adventure in the new
Wisdom in the gold
And pleasure in the blue

and the grass is always green
with better days ahead
don't think about tomorrow
where the blue flows into red

Some are happy as they are
and some will never be
Some are bound to go far
if they just get free.

(1990 - all I can recall right now)

hillwalker
11-09-2010, 07:21 AM
A pleasant enough poem, but it's just a series of cliches really. Perhaps you need to explore more why there is 'wisdom in the gold' and what makes 'blue flow into red'.

H