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Jack of Hearts
11-06-2010, 07:13 PM
Who devours you, Lana?
Who can pull your body
like water to dry-cracked lips?

Who claws through your thick dark mane
gasping ecstasy tickles pain
and wetly nips where caramel
neck arches
flow into shoulderblades

The deepest hunger
seizing tight

A greedy animal
back-throat slavering

Lana ignite my flesh
from the inside
out

jajdude
11-06-2010, 09:03 PM
i like your work Jack. This one had a lot of bite.

also: love Dylan

hillwalker
11-07-2010, 07:58 AM
I sense Blood on the Tracks in a good deal of your work. This one I particularly enjoyed reading.

H