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Jack of Hearts
11-04-2010, 01:39 AM
This
is a stick up
Give me your money
your women
and a little appreciation
Good, put them all
on the donkey
Please
don't amateurly load
the donkey
Distribute the weight evenly
across the donkey
that's better
I gotta pass 50 miles
before I realize
I took nothing of value
and I need a
properly functioning donkey
when I was younger
Coulda sworn he was a horse

Haunted
11-04-2010, 11:11 AM
I enjoyed the humor and satire in such a pithy, condensed form. Very well done.

YesNo
11-04-2010, 11:17 AM
How many women are you going to get on the donkey? :)

Delta40
11-04-2010, 05:06 PM
lol very entertaining and also rather sad.

Jerrybaldy
11-04-2010, 07:26 PM
I have no real idea what you are writing of but I have a definite idea that I enjoyed reading it

drago
11-05-2010, 11:02 PM
I have no real idea what you are writing of but I have a definite idea that I enjoyed reading it

Ha! Agreed, sincerely.