Ego Death and a Donkey

[Jack of Hearts]

This
is a stick up
Give me your money
your women
and a little appreciation
Good, put them all
on the donkey
Please
don't amateurly load
the donkey
Distribute the weight evenly
across the donkey
that's better
I gotta pass 50 miles
before I realize
I took nothing of value
and I need a
properly functioning donkey
when I was younger
Coulda sworn he was a horse

[Haunted]

I enjoyed the humor and satire in such a pithy, condensed form. Very well done.

[YesNo]

How many women are you going to get on the donkey? :)

[Delta40]

lol very entertaining and also rather sad.

[Jerrybaldy]

I have no real idea what you are writing of but I have a definite idea that I enjoyed reading it

[drago]

I have no real idea what you are writing of but I have a definite idea that I enjoyed reading it

Ha! Agreed, sincerely.