Find me

[Delta40]

Reject, omit,
banish, eliminate.
Weed me out.

Compose, make up,
embody, form.
Comprehend me.

Entirety, fullness,
absolute, consumate.
Go the whole hog.

Section, fragment,
splinter, portion.
Smash me to smithereens.

[Haunted]

This can be you, or the personification of a piece of writing. It's bold and I like it.

[Silas Thorne]

Why all this smashing, tearing and ripping at the end? Nothing ever truly leaves, though whether this is good or bad I don't know.

[Maryd.]

Hey Delta, smash and rip away.
Been there, done that!
Mwah
xoxox

[Delta40]

I like the word smithereens and wonder about its relationship to a smithy....

[Haunted]

oh please tell us about smithy!

[Silas Thorne]

Forge on Delta! Forge on!

[blainebeckner]

Good stuff! Keep them coming!

[Delta40]

The Irish 'smidirin', a diminutive of 'smiodar', meaning fragment, circa 1829

oh! I'm disappointed. hoped it had something to do with the hammering work of a smithy.....ah well

[hillwalker]

I don't quite know why I like this. It suggests someone losing trust in their place in existence - perhaps based on past experiences that always end up with the narrator being crushed in some way.

It's a simply structured piece but its impact is immense.

H

[Cunninglinguist]

You dare the reader and leave her to wonder what will happen if she takes you up on that dare. Since I like it and I'd rather not take you up on that dare I bid my kudos :D

[Delta40]

You dare the reader and leave her to wonder what will happen if she takes you up on that dare. Since I like it and I'd rather not take you up on that dare I bid my kudos :D

I'm really in awe of the varied interpretations of my fellow-litnetters, who give so much more to my poem than I could ever imagine.

thank you all.

[kittypaws]

I enjoyed this as I am in a state of whimsical thoughts...

First the title... Find Me and you want to be found sooo someone can


Reject, omit You and then you asked


Comprehend me Very interesting!

Next you want to be taken whole after we found you, rejected you and then understood You....

Go the whole hog.

And finally you want to be smashed to
smithereens !!!! OUCH!

Dear Delta ~ after all we have been thru together how could I ever smash you to smithereens! That is what we do to the left over carved pumpkins to release our stress!

Adorable!

Thanks for the smiles!

Kittypaws

[zoolane]

Well half reminder me of gardened and other of broken heart. Reject also follow through the poem. I think.