The Power

[kittypaws]

You have been saved by your Angel.
She saw into your soul;
Knew you had much to give.
Feeling your pain inside;
She swept you up within her wings,
Carried you to a place of restful things.

A bed of downy feathers and starlit smiles
The cool feel of dew, the rainbow’s hue...
She cradled your aching body
And fed it new life
To make life new.

Your Angel sacrificed herself for You.

Arising with a smile upon your face
You resounded of a rekindled being;
Only to find you Guardian slumped
Down upon where you once lay.
Exhausted from passing on her blessings,
Her eyes were dim and face drawn.
You reached to her and magic comes.

Her eyes come alive with a sparkle
A smile slips upon her lips
Color races into her countenance.
Her breath is strong
Lifting her arms she wraps
Them around you.
And breathes a warm kiss of living.

Both saved thru the power of love.

Kittypaws

[Haunted]

This is a lovely poem Kitty, the way you wrote it has a healing effect on me too.

[Delta40]

Nicel poem Kitty.

May I suggest you replace 'saw' with 'looked' as the angel would have to look before she could see.

I also question: A smile slips upon her lips, only because slipping suggests downwards or letting go and does not sit well next to upon - but that is opinion only of course

I especially like
A bed of downy feathers and starlit smiles
The cool feel of dew, the rainbow’s hue...
She cradled your aching body
And fed it new life
To make life new

[kittypaws]

Thank you Haunted, glad to send some healing your way.

Delta ~ I went back and forth with 'saw' and 'looked', thanks for setting me straight. In regards to 'A smile slips upon her lips' perhaps 'A smile blossoms upon her lips.'

kittypaws

[Delta40]

what about 'a smile plays upon her lips'

[Jerrybaldy]

You write from the heart dear Kitty. I would drop the last line. It was already said by being unsaid.
cheers
Jerry