Sleep Well

[kittypaws]

When you drift off to slumber ~
Dream of me.
With flowers in my hair
And the smell of sweet jasmine.
Sleep well.
Hold me tight and
We will protect each other
Against the night.

kittypaws

[Haunted]

Such a sweet little piece to read at bedtime. Thanks kittypaws

[hillwalker]

A nice piece - almost like a prayer.

H

[YesNo]

The "tight" and "night" sounds make a nice ending for this.

[Delta40]

I can smell the Jasmine already Kitty.

[PrinceMyshkin]

To better emphasize the tight/night rhyme - and the poem needs a rhyme to kiss it to sleep, as it were - you might consider moving "and" from the end of the third to last line to the beginning of the next line.

[Jerrybaldy]

impossibly heartwarming. hard not to love.
Jerry

[kittypaws]

Thank You all...
and H it is a pray for someone fall away that I still long to meet.

Prince, I agree with you. Thank you for the advice.

kittypaws