i'll never know.

[litnot23]

I'll never know you. not your touch. Not your smell. not your looks or your sound.Ill miss you so dreadfully I'll miss you the most. people turn and ask why? You never knew him . What theydon't know is that its not you death that makes me sad.its the loss. The fact never hear your fatherly voice in my head. Not feel your supportive hand on my shoulder. That is what rips my heart into little pieces . The fact that there is a part of me I don't know about.
Will never know and never forget.

[Delta40]

Lit not, I suggest you put this eloquent little piece into verse as it will read much better and is very touching. There are a couple of words missing from the poem.

I'll never know you.
not your touch.
Not your smell.
not your looks or
your sound.

Ill miss you so dreadfully
I'll miss you the most.
people turn and ask why?
You never knew him .
What theydon't know is
that its not you death
that makes me sad.
its the loss.

The fact never hear
your fatherly voice in my head.
Not feel your supportive hand on my shoulder.
That is what rips my heart into little pieces .
The fact that there is a part of me I don't know about.
Will never know and never forget.

[Maryd.]

Welcome litnot... Loved your first words. :)

[hoope]

Great work Litnot !
I loved it :)

Wlc to litnet work..
And i agree with Delta its is better this way.. and you can post it at the Personal Poetry forum .. you will get more comments out there .

Regards,
Hoope