blood start it....blood end it

[freestory]

rhythm of blood drops outoff a sagged hand....few flashes....a typical start of a crime show....
damn its the end of a life

[hillwalker]

******

[hillwalker]

Am I right in guessing this is a tweet (hence the brevity)?
If so correct punctuation, spelling and grammar are vital for it to qualify as a legitimate tweet:

the rhythm of blood drops out of a [sagged] sagging [?] hand.... a few flashes....a typical start of a crime show....
damn it's the end of a life

I'm not sure where you're heading with this other than it's the Halloween season

H