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Haunted
10-29-2010, 07:30 PM
I am feral
defiant
selfish
& vain

I like you a lot
when you
worship me

I like you even more
when you bleed
by my scratches




but tonight
at the witching hour
donning a pink choker
I am just a sleepy eyed
lap cat

PrinceMyshkin
10-29-2010, 08:02 PM
Eerie, like a painting in which you used a straight razor instead of brushes!

And somehow, you know, that "pink choker" was the spookiest detail rather than the costume of this alleged lap cat.

Delta40
10-29-2010, 08:45 PM
very nice. waspish almost. You say alot with so few lines Haunted.

hack
10-29-2010, 10:21 PM
It is good Haunted.
Playful and dangerous.
...peace...

kittypaws
10-29-2010, 11:05 PM
take yourself off the tracks
the train doesn't run this way!

Haunted ~ your season?

Happy Halloween!!


:yikes:

kittypaws

hoope
10-30-2010, 07:44 AM
Great one Haunted :)
You always make it good in a simple small way .

Haunted
10-30-2010, 09:56 AM
Prince — lol yes, allegedly...

...and waspishly too, thanks Delta

Hack, so glad you enjoyed it :reddevil:

Kittypaws, show me the right tracks! My season? (or reason?) Summer is the answer to "season". Thanks so much for your comment :)

Thanks Hoope, Happy Halloween to you too!!!

Jerrybaldy
10-30-2010, 06:05 PM
haunted
I now see why, cats.
They would never hold you back, on your way down.
An original haunted halloween treat.
jerry

Maryd.
10-30-2010, 06:21 PM
Yes girlie... Very original. But I didn't expect anything less.

Haunted
10-31-2010, 07:42 PM
Jerry, the scariest thing is you remembered the last line...

Thanks Mary!

Jerrybaldy
10-31-2010, 08:02 PM
I remember all the lines before also :)

Haunted
10-31-2010, 11:54 PM
get a life Jerry! Now excuse me while I head off to print a copy of Crash 48 :D

Hawkman
11-01-2010, 05:18 AM
you're always onto a winner with a cat poem :D

Haunted
11-01-2010, 12:20 PM
thanks Hawk, in that case may cats rule forever in the haunted world ;)