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Haunted
10-29-2010, 07:30 PM
I am feral
defiant
selfish
& vain
I like you a lot
when you
worship me
I like you even more
when you bleed
by my scratches
but tonight
at the witching hour
donning a pink choker
I am just a sleepy eyed
lap cat
PrinceMyshkin
10-29-2010, 08:02 PM
Eerie, like a painting in which you used a straight razor instead of brushes!
And somehow, you know, that "pink choker" was the spookiest detail rather than the costume of this alleged lap cat.
Delta40
10-29-2010, 08:45 PM
very nice. waspish almost. You say alot with so few lines Haunted.
It is good Haunted.
Playful and dangerous.
...peace...
kittypaws
10-29-2010, 11:05 PM
take yourself off the tracks
the train doesn't run this way!
Haunted ~ your season?
Happy Halloween!!
:yikes:
kittypaws
hoope
10-30-2010, 07:44 AM
Great one Haunted :)
You always make it good in a simple small way .
Haunted
10-30-2010, 09:56 AM
Prince — lol yes, allegedly...
...and waspishly too, thanks Delta
Hack, so glad you enjoyed it :reddevil:
Kittypaws, show me the right tracks! My season? (or reason?) Summer is the answer to "season". Thanks so much for your comment :)
Thanks Hoope, Happy Halloween to you too!!!
Jerrybaldy
10-30-2010, 06:05 PM
haunted
I now see why, cats.
They would never hold you back, on your way down.
An original haunted halloween treat.
jerry
Maryd.
10-30-2010, 06:21 PM
Yes girlie... Very original. But I didn't expect anything less.
Haunted
10-31-2010, 07:42 PM
Jerry, the scariest thing is you remembered the last line...
Thanks Mary!
Jerrybaldy
10-31-2010, 08:02 PM
I remember all the lines before also :)
Haunted
10-31-2010, 11:54 PM
get a life Jerry! Now excuse me while I head off to print a copy of Crash 48 :D
Hawkman
11-01-2010, 05:18 AM
you're always onto a winner with a cat poem :D
Haunted
11-01-2010, 12:20 PM
thanks Hawk, in that case may cats rule forever in the haunted world ;)
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