Quickie.

[Delta40]

It is a struggle
to squeeze you in
like a fat man
through a window.
You split my core
in less than sixty
though you erupt in thirty
What an awesome surge
of pleasure!
Your panting withdrawal
leaves the residue of
a smile on my face

[PrinceMyshkin]

Can you hear my deep, throaty pantings... al the way to Australia? Deft and as swift as... well...

[Lumiere]

So many Sexy-Times poems lately.
It is . . . exciting.

[Haunted]

woot woot

[hillwalker]

Short and..... premature?

[_Shannon_]

Residue on your face?? Is that meaning what I think it does? If it doesn't, then a different word besides residue might be a better choice :)

[Jerrybaldy]

Ouch. Enough to crush any male ego. Luckily I sometimes drag it out to 120 :D
How the hell did you dream up a fat man through a window? You are one unique voice Ms D.

[Silas Thorne]

:D

Yes, a quickie, but maybe you could have expressed it in even fewer words.
'to squeeze you
like a fat man
through a window.'

Great simile here! An image of Winnie the Pooh came to me though. But he gorged himself on honey and couldn't get out.

[Maryd.]

I loved it Delta... Don't change a thing it's perfect.

[Delta40]

I loved it Delta... Don't change a thing it's perfect.

I tried to Maryd but it was all over before I could! :hand:

[Delta40]

:D

Yes, a quickie, but maybe you could have expressed it in even fewer words.
'to squeeze you
like a fat man
through a window.'

Great simile here! An image of Winnie the Pooh came to me though. But he gorged himself on honey and couldn't get out.

I remember that one. I think The Jagular was my favourite.

[PrinceMyshkin]

A quickie
is tricky
when a man’s wee dickie
goes flicky
splat!

[Silas Thorne]

oh dear!
Now that was just vulgar, PrinceMyshkin.

[kittypaws]

was it worth it?

kittypaws