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bojangle
10-22-2010, 08:08 PM
alone
sitting here
spending time so that time is not spent in that place
that place i know too well
drives me crazy
what i should have done, i didn't do
what i should have seen, i didn't
what should have been said, could have, but wasn't
too scared, too small, too weak
sitting here
alone

Jerrybaldy
10-22-2010, 08:16 PM
Not many clues to work on Bo.
I liked the symmetry of begining and end and the unrelenting regret.
cheers
jery

PrinceMyshkin
10-22-2010, 08:23 PM
Kind of moving, as if spoken in a confessional.

Delta40
10-22-2010, 08:46 PM
Not specific but that means readers all over the world can apply this self-recimination to their own lives.

well done