The Reality.

[zoolane]

The Reality.

The two reality have come one. My true reality with calm, serenity and some sort of order. I knew what my existence is. It which I had routine going but with no warning. It is gone. I woke up and put on the news on. All I heard about that time is gone and other reality has come in it place. We were told by the Prime Minster life is to carrying on as normal.

As I walked out the door to go work. The sky wasn't blue but deep violet with lime green stars shine brightly. The ground below my feet is not tarmac or a pavement. In off brown colour floor it was everywhere. Now the people look same but act with menacing and cunning with moment notice flying into random acts of violence or to good to be true acts.

Try my best to see the day through to end. I manage to make home but the reality has change to whole different level.Outside my house and in the garden. All people I see now. They true dead in my own reality. Is my new reality same does other peoples or not?

[zoolane]

How can they be alive. Some are suppose be 6 foot under or burn into ashes in box or scatter. They walking round with a reddish mist over them. They are wear their favourite clothes. Is it me that make my reality like this or is something or someone else?

I have close the front door and turn off all the plug sockets in my house apart from one for radio. Oh and fridge. I am gone back to basics, I am not told sure why but just feel that I need to. I have to listen to Cd's because it news on all time on every station.
I search for any and every book, I can find to reading. In bid to save me from going insane.

[hillwalker]

Another change of focus - this is a little like science fiction or some psychological exploration of reality.

It's only a short piece of course, but it got a bit muddled by the end - are you saying everyone has become a zombie as well as the whole world changing in appearance?

'Reality' is an interesting concept because some people would say that we all have our own unique reality - for example, the colour orange that I see is not necessaily the same as how you see orange (but of course we all give it the name 'orange').

H

[zoolane]

Well OK I see where you come from but now do I know that it the subject 1st reality and not 2ND. That I convey to reader. The subtle bit that end and is suggest that the writer not be all there in mind.

[hillwalker]

So you're suggesting delusions - with an obsessive compulsive disorder thrown in - and a little paranoia perhaps, which becomes clearer in the 2nd posting.

Unfortunately I missed all of this when I posted my response because you were posting your 2nd piece while I was scribbling away.

It was the ending of the 1st piece that seemed confusing. Perhaps rejigging that final paragraph can tie things up - it's a very original bit of work.

H

[zoolane]

Thank you for comment Hill, I rearrange the last paragraph in 1st post.