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Jerrybaldy
10-17-2010, 07:35 PM
You need to despise yourself
to the very core,
before you can despise others,
for reflecting
your own weakness.
You need to not love somebody
to your very depths
to appreciate that love
flows in blood.
You need to think too much
to see your love
is pure procreation
and the need to protect your young.
With the cat out of the bag,
you need a poem
to give a meaning
where there is none.

Delta40
10-17-2010, 08:12 PM
This poem be my first full English for the day!

What a self-examiner you are Jerry.

I love/hate projecting

Maryd.
10-17-2010, 08:26 PM
:(

Good one.

kittypaws
10-17-2010, 11:43 PM
your poem sounds like the person who is loving really isn't That always makes me sad ....when some one uses you up.

I can only say, I hope this is just a write of thought and not one of reality.

kittypaws

smiles and warrm fuzzies

hillwalker
10-18-2010, 05:47 AM
Written with a degree of self-loathing, but those final four lines show there is hope for us all.

H

Jerrybaldy
10-18-2010, 12:28 PM
Delta ; I hope 'self examiner' isn't some kind of euphism there ;)
Thank you Mary and Kitty and thank you Hill for finding some light in the end.

PrinceMyshkin
10-18-2010, 02:19 PM
thank you Hill for finding some light in the end.

I on the other hand (dissenting from Hill) found light all the way through this: the light of intelligence, of honesty, of someone daring to the best of his ability to face some harsh truths about himself and others.

Haunted
10-18-2010, 03:14 PM
thought provoking Jerry. Time for my own reality check.