A Night on the Town

[Captain Pike]

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[Steven Hunley]

This is a strong piece. No way could someone write this is this fashion who had not been there. The angles could only be seen from someone in that particular position. So you convey all the angles, not just the geometric angles, the sense of helplessness, what hospitals are like, and the reader follows along and understands. Yet you do not sob and get all teary-eyed about it. Realism, I love it.

[hillwalker]

There's a strong sense of authenticity in the way this is written - we are there with you sharing your every move and concerns. But what I liked best was the ironic humour - especially at the end when you observe you have finally been able to 'blend in' with the rest of society, albeit it on a stretcher in an emergency room. A great read.

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[Delta40]

wow. you really wrote a thought provoking piece here. the wonders of the human mind to explore and reconcile to its own unique circumstances is apparent here and I like how you have brought my attention to something I would not ordinarily think about.

[alcala0001]

A very good story, written from a convincing perspective. Kudos on a good piece!