Life.

[zoolane]

Life.

If it was 1st day of my life.
I would be babe in arms.
With whole world that my feet.

If I was 8 years old.
I would be 4 foot tall.
With a bit of knowledge.

If I was 15 years old.
I think I know everything.
With a mouth on me.

I am adult now.
With knowledge from lifetime.
With hope of being reborn again.

[hillwalker]

I love verse 3 and that line 'With a mouth on me' - probably the most enlightening of the four verses because it reveals so much about you in so few words.

I'm puzzled by the very last line - but I suppose most of us would grab a chance to be reborn if it was available.

H

[zoolane]

I love verse 3 and that line 'With a mouth on me' - probably the most enlightening of the four verses because it reveals so much about you in so few words.

I'm puzzled by the very last line - but I suppose most of us would grab a chance to be reborn if it was available.

H

I suppose what I am said that even if I was to be reborn again. My life and up bringing was same with people in as well. I would probably try being school bit more in my teenagers years special English.

[hillwalker]

But it's never too late, as you are discovering.

[Jerrybaldy]

It was a brave title zoo. But it flowed through making sense at each stop and I agree with Hill, you are busy being reborn here.
best wishes
Jerry

[zoolane]

But it's never too late, as you are discovering.


It was a brave title zoo. But it flowed through making sense at each stop and I agree with Hill, you are busy being reborn here.
best wishes
Jerry


Discovering I am with help of college and Lit-nitters. Thank you both.

[Haunted]

Clearly you've reborn with a pen as part of your hand :) I too got a chuckle when I got to S4.

[Delta40]

Hope of rebirth or to learn from our ways....nice capture of life cycles Zoo