Live

[Remedy]

Dance with the moon
the snow covered streets your dance floor
the street lights your disco ball
the traffic and the stores your music
the people your partners

Sing with the sun
the birds your rythem
the sea your beat
the animals your background singers
the clouds your insperation
]Live with the beat of the earth

[tailor STATELY]

Dance with the moon
the snow covered streets your dance floor
the street lights your disco ball
the traffic and the stores your music
the people your partners

Sing with the sun
the birds your rythem
the sea your beat
the animals your background singers
the clouds your insperation
]Live with the beat of the earth

Typos sb: "rhythm" and "inspiration"
'Sprite': "]" probably not intended.

Enjoyed your poem. I would have expected 'stars' and 'seas' and etc. to grace your poem as well with their verses.

Would have enjoyed your poem more with a little more word play rather than a laundry list of expression; but it does work as a good start.

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor STATELY

[hillwalker]

I enjoyed this, although as TS said there is more you could perhaps have done with the original idea to make it stand out. But it has a certain simplicity about it and one can imagine it was written with a smile.

H

[Remedy]

It was done really quick I was just trying to write something but thanks. :D

[Haunted]

It's glorious to see the dancing throughout the night till day. Well done.

[Jerrybaldy]

It made me think of 'sieze the day' and that needs reminding daily.
welcome
Jerry