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Silas Thorne
10-13-2010, 08:12 PM
Spaced out by waiting in wide open spaces
I hear the cicadas out by the trees,
where the swallows skim lightly, close over land's carpet,
there is a connection.
There, by the base of your shadow.
There, where your foot sole's tied on tight.
Creeping up your spine,
flashing in your grey eyes bright,
there is a connection.





(Thanks to NikolaiI, for singing a beautiful song.)

NikolaiI
10-13-2010, 09:04 PM
A poem in my honour! Thanks, Silas! I needed that. :)
Loved the first line especially..

and I think I noticed, but could be different interpretations and meanings, but I think I noticed a few in the lines

"There, by the base of your shadow.
There, where your foot sole's tied on tight."

Great poem!

hillwalker
10-14-2010, 05:49 AM
This is a very elegantly constructed poem with some nice touches - liked 'the land's carpet' and 'your foot sole's tied on tight' in particular.

H

PrinceMyshkin
10-14-2010, 11:17 AM
The thrill of it is, for me, that it feels as if you just opened your mouth and the song came out spontaneously!

Jerrybaldy
10-14-2010, 05:49 PM
I can't say I understood it, but I enjoyed it all the same .. and why 2010 release?
JerryB