English Language (poems)

[zoolane]

English Language

I wish; I was could be just you.
With your knowledge of English Language.
Be able to write the perfect sentence.
With commas,semi-colons used in right place.

I am; who I am.
With my unique way of write.
But yet.
I am still able to express myself freely.

[zoolane]

The Window.

I look in to window of mind.

I see you shiver with fear.
Fear is the colour ice blue.

The window is come mist.
Mist is anxious show itself.

The window is get bright.

Yellow is shine through.
Your confidence has come back.

[PrinceMyshkin]

English Language

I wish; I was could be just you.
With your knowledge of English Language.
Be able to write the perfect sentence.
With commas,semi-colons used in right place.

I am; who I am.
With my unique way of write.
But yet.
I am still able to express myself freely.

And you know, sometimes the desire and the will to express oneself freely is worth more than a whole carload of commas, semi-colons &c. Good for you!

[hillwalker]

There are hundreds of thousands of people who are able to write in correct English with every comma and full stop in the right place.

But if they have nothing worth saying.... well, who is the poorer then? These people? Or someone like you who has a wealth of original thoughts and a voice that demands to be listened to?

You can learn to write better. They can never learn to be original because that is something that cannot be taught.

And your 'window of the mind' is a very evocative image of how someone like yourself is maturing as a writer.

H

[zoolane]

And you know, sometimes the desire and the will to express oneself freely is worth more than a whole carload of commas, semi-colons &c. Good for you!


There are hundreds of thousands of people who are able to write in correct English with every comma and full stop in the right place.

But if they have nothing worth saying.... well, who is the poorer then? These people? Or someone like you who has a wealth of original thoughts and a voice that demands to be listened to?

You can learn to write better. They can never learn to be original because that is something that cannot be taught.

And your 'window of the mind' is a very evocative image of how someone like yourself is maturing as a writer.

H

Thank you both very much just the little boast I need right now.

[Delta40]

English Language

I wish; I was could be just you.
With your knowledge of English Language.
Be able to write the perfect sentence.
With commas,semi-colons used in right place.

I am; who I am.
With my unique way of write.
But yet.
I am still able to express myself freely.


Have a boost from me.:hat:

[Jerrybaldy]

English language.
Super power boost dear zoo. I have no idea where to put a colon or a semi colon. I think Hill said all that needed to be said.
best wishes
JerryB

[Delta40]

Sometimes a colonic cleanse is just what the doctor ordered!