Good Loving Man

[Lamar Cole]

My sweetheart is as sweet as raindrops dripping off a rose petal.
As lovely as the beams reflected from the moon.
As brilliant as the brightest star.
As romantic as a Paul Anka tune.

She's as lively as Glenn Miller's Big Band.
As fresh as a winter snow that covers the land.
Neverending love like grains in the sand.
Makes me feel like her good loving man.

[Delta40]

This poem has a sweet, yet cheesy ring to it - as if it were locked in another time. Paul Anka, Glen Miller. Its definitely romantic and the bygone days feel to it makes me smile

[Scheherazade]

This poem has a sweet, yet cheesy ring to it - as if it were locked in another time. Paul Anka, Glen Miller. I agree with Delta that it is too sweet for its own good! :D

I enjoyed reading it and wished it had not ended where it ended; and I am not sure why it did. We need to hear some more before you could deliver your punch line. As it is, for me, it is all hanging in the air, let down by a rushed conclusion.