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Silas Thorne
10-04-2010, 05:29 PM
Glacial processes learn to meditate
chart disc breakfast radio
red retreats, Simply Red,
farewell $10 shopping voucher symphonicity
appliances 4 rent celebrate public art
the copy centre has moved general staff
U Can Dance!
What are the odds? What kind of behaviour is this?
Don't you think you're killing something beautiful?

Silas Thorne
10-04-2010, 05:37 PM
deleted as it was too crap :)

Delta40
10-04-2010, 05:54 PM
I was a little puzzled by it. I do look for meaning, especially when there doesn't seem to be any real pattern. Maybe that is its appeal?

PrinceMyshkin
10-04-2010, 06:43 PM
Is this a specie of found poetry? Random phrases picked up here and there? If so, I thought there might or ought to be a theme or pattern to be discerned but didn't find one.

hillwalker
10-05-2010, 01:30 PM
I also assumed it was found poetry, making a statement perhaps on how words and language are cheapened by the media - cliches that become so over-used to sell a product or a lifestyle that the lose any meaning that was there originally.

There's also such randomness about the whole piece that suggests it has got to make sense.

H