2nd Bite

[munkinhead]

This span of years
is closing now,
I've feasted on
the sacred cow.

Every insult
has reigned down,
as vomit from
besotted crown.

I searched in vain
for noble bliss,
and here I sit
in my own piss.

The end is near,
I smell it now,
I'd hoped for
one more taste of cow.

[Jerrybaldy]

hello munkinhead
it seems to have been a while. Where you been?
Loved your rhyme and your words (incidently I love that piss doesnt disappear into asterixes here :) ) I read it as old age and the longing for youth and loved how you put that across and the sacred cow and one more taste.
good job
Jerry