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loki456
09-27-2010, 06:58 AM
wow, never knew writing one poem would lead to another... as you can tell, work is quite boring at the moment.

btw no hidden meaning here. unless you want there to be :sosp:

The Valley

I wandered a valley wide and long
Amongst the strewn branches and a path went wrong
Betwixt the bright burning lights and a darkness eerie
I found myself shattered, wanting and weary

The path was lost, in memory it remains
The protagonist fought against insanity and vain
His mind bogged at the calamity in hand
For if strife befell, in a path lost be his last stand

The nights veil lifted and brought with it day
His eyes peering through tempered light at the intended way
For I have wandered a valley wide and long
Amongst the strewn branches and a way went wrong

Delta40
09-27-2010, 07:03 AM
aha! in lil ol WA its a public holiday.....sun shining etc etc.

When is the Raven going to arrive? sounds nice and eerie