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Maryd.
09-27-2010, 05:26 AM
Jigsaw: Sung by the Malta Sisters?

Picking up the pieces of my mind
But they sure are hard to find
Then trying to put them back in place
Giving me a familiar face.
The kind I like - and recall
But my heart has lost it all
like jigsaw pieces on the ground
My life scattered round and round
Some pieces caught between my thumb
Found the me, who never looked so glum
A border with my smile a mile long
Left me thinking, where did I go wrong?
Thinking of how life used to be...
With the love from you and the smile of me.

zoolane
09-27-2010, 05:33 AM
Lovely poem about heart break and now it play with emotions. well done Delta and Maryd.

Maryd.
09-27-2010, 05:36 AM
Dearest Zoolane... Thank you kindly for reading it and leaving a beautiful comment.

Delta40
09-27-2010, 05:39 AM
Thank you Zoo. The Malta Sisters hold hands and bow in unison!

loki456
09-27-2010, 05:41 AM
I love the last 2 lines. It reminds me of a love that's ended but not forgotten, a love that's ended but not in hatred.
very beautiful guys.
keep it up

dafydd manton
09-27-2010, 05:45 AM
The Malta Sisters - what a Tour de Force. Can I have your autographs, please?????

Delta40
09-27-2010, 06:31 AM
Scrawls 'Malta Lava' across Daffy's chest

dafydd manton
09-27-2010, 06:40 AM
Ouch! Next time, please don't use a pencil!

Maryd.
09-27-2010, 07:10 AM
Ok, everyone line up... Signatures all round...
Who's first?

dafydd manton
09-27-2010, 07:13 AM
Me me me me me me me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please sing this - in lipstick. (Not mine, yours!!)

Maryd.
09-27-2010, 07:20 AM
Ok.... signs, using her hot red lipstick...
Hahahaha

dafydd manton
09-27-2010, 07:22 AM
Thank you, I shall treasure this always!!!!!

Maryd.
09-27-2010, 07:27 AM
Go on.... You're pulling my leg...
Hee hee hee
Blushes...

loki456
09-27-2010, 08:01 AM
hey i want one too.... :(

Delta40
09-27-2010, 08:16 AM
Candy pink lipstick scrawl across Loki

loki456
09-27-2010, 08:31 AM
woot scrawl away

PrinceMyshkin
09-27-2010, 08:57 AM
Salutes to the new duo! Worked out really well.

Maryd.
09-27-2010, 10:35 AM
Thanks again Prince.... I think I speak on Delta's behalf when I say we really appreciate your comment.

Haunted
09-27-2010, 10:41 AM
This is so seamless, great job. Enjoyed it a lot, so true of life.

Maryd.
09-27-2010, 10:45 AM
Hey, thanks my baby Haunted... Mwah.

Delta40
09-27-2010, 04:15 PM
Thanks everyone. Mary is a great inspiration

dafydd manton
09-27-2010, 04:20 PM
To have written a love poem between two of you is really remarkable - a confluence of two major talents in one piece of work. Well done, my admiration to both of you. (Not in any particular order!)

Jerrybaldy
09-27-2010, 04:26 PM
Et tu delte ? :P
Good work ladies :D
JerryB

Delta40
09-27-2010, 04:31 PM
as Manuel would say: che?

Jerrybaldy
09-27-2010, 05:22 PM
Guevara ?

dafydd manton
09-27-2010, 05:24 PM
Famous as the world's worst motorcyclist!!!

Delta40
09-27-2010, 05:26 PM
This is another picture I can't quite put together.

Jerrybaldy
09-27-2010, 05:29 PM
matron, matron. Daffy is being confusing again. You told him about that.

dafydd manton
09-27-2010, 05:31 PM
Che Guevara. Read his memoirs, he spent the best part of a year falling off motorbikes on his way to Bolivia. Donchoo no nuffink?? Pass the tablets!

Jerrybaldy
09-27-2010, 06:04 PM
ahhh. all becomes clear. only know him as an icon. I have no depth :)

Maryd.
09-27-2010, 07:51 PM
Thanks everyone. Mary is a great inspiration

No my love it takes two to make up a team...
Mwah dear.

dafydd manton
09-27-2010, 07:55 PM
Ah, true, but I happen to know that Delta is right!!!! I've experienced it!

Maryd.
09-27-2010, 08:01 PM
Oh stop it... I'm going all shy again....

dafydd manton
09-27-2010, 08:06 PM
You've gone red!!!!! Suits you!!!

Maryd.
09-27-2010, 08:17 PM
Who needs tomatoes, when I am around... Hahahaha