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Trying
09-26-2010, 06:11 PM
killing of imagination

Endless nights going on through eternity
the stars sing happliy and the moon dances on the water
thoughts fall from the planets and land in all of our heads
but reality puts up its block and now theyre dead

Jerrybaldy
09-26-2010, 07:01 PM
The block didnt stop your imagination Trying :)

Delta40
09-26-2010, 07:31 PM
nice poem Trying. May I suggest:

thoughts fall from the planets and land within our heads

Trying
09-27-2010, 11:39 AM
Thank you both. And Delta i like it thank you for the suggestion.