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Buh4Bee
09-26-2010, 03:59 PM
Angel Baby

Each time you rattle your keys,
I pull the string on your nursery rhyme
As if I am throwing a handful of seeds to a pack of pigeons.

You ask now for your milk from my body,
Drain the liquid dry, leaving behind a vessel of love.
Although empty, I am sustained by your music and joy.

In the floor’s sunbeam, I look and listen to you,
your hands and breath are part of mine.
You are my living prayer.

Virgil
09-26-2010, 04:20 PM
While I can't relate to the "sucking the milk from my body" :p I can't realte to the over arching sentiment. I found the phrase "In the floor's sunbeam" fascinating. Thanks for the poem Jersea. :)

hillwalker
09-26-2010, 04:33 PM
This is a loving picture of a mother worshipping the very existence of her child, but it manages to avoid all the sickly, syrupy images and language normally assciated with such poetry. Magical.

Delta40
09-26-2010, 05:51 PM
my eldest daughter moved out on Saturday. this poem is just what I need to shed a few more tears Jersea....thanks

dafydd manton
09-26-2010, 05:59 PM
Dads feel it as well, but not perhaps as much!!!! Thanks!! Beautiful.

Jerrybaldy
09-26-2010, 06:18 PM
lovely maternal thought