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GEETASHREE
09-25-2010, 10:21 PM
A broken twig
A chunk of life
Wrapped in an autumn leaf

A tilted moon
A jilted sky
A pair of leaking rainy eyes

A poignant plea
A splendid serene
Ethereal dream of clinging bliss

A sultry noon
A brazen sky
A winding path of molten ash

A chiffon spread
A placid morn
A breeze with a haunting song

What do I choose?
What do I pick?
An autumn leaf
A tilted moon
A jilted sky
Rainy eyes
Poignant dreams
Ashen path
A hissing morn
A singing breeze
Or
Just a neglected
Broken twig

hillwalker
09-26-2010, 07:35 AM
There's something about this that I like, picking out the little insignificant things that when combined make up a picture of a contented life.

GEETASHREE
09-26-2010, 08:44 AM
There's something about this that I like, picking out the little insignificant things that when combined make up a picture of a contented life.

Thank you Mr. Hill, you made my day. Regards