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whitman
09-25-2010, 01:10 PM
With eternity's knife
i removed the mask
worn in life and on
a grave read twice
the name i held in life-
death requires no name
-my old friends the fools
believe they receive my
guidance during a seance-
who moves the glass?-
I wasn't in control
when i passed from home
to work,work to home-

Skia
09-25-2010, 01:12 PM
I felt a cold chill then I must say, I enjoyed reading this...

My favourite lines were
" With eternity's knife
i removed the mask
worn in life and on
a grave read twice"

Truly a great read :)

Delta40
09-25-2010, 05:01 PM
wise insight into the uselessness of a seance...

especially like

I wasn't in control
when i passed from home
to work,work to home-