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BienvenuJDC
09-24-2010, 05:03 PM
My heart is open
ready for a touch
but it seems that all
it gets is an ouch

I don't know what to do
I don't know how to act
I'm ready to clench it tight
and make with it a pact

I won't open you to just
anyone who might come near
I'll be careful not to allow you
to see pain for you to bear

So for now I'll tuck you in
hold you within my soul
so I'll have you for the next
ready again and made whole

but for now I feel that
I should remain quite clever
and make it seem like
I'm done with love forever.

Delta40
09-24-2010, 05:39 PM
I was so bowled over by the first stanza that I didn't quite take in the rest. I feel as if everything you could say about your heart was in the first four amazing lines!

BienvenuJDC
09-25-2010, 01:04 AM
Although she is gone from here
I hear her lovely voice so near
her laugh rings through the air
and fills my heart with peaceful care

His life was dedicated to me
sacrifices made so I'd be happy
since I was bouncing upon his knee
even now he in the mirror I see

it's more than DNA within my flesh
not just chromosomes in their mesh
but even chastity given by a thresh
built character and made me fresh

spoken of with tense of past
my memories will always last
not by pictures on walls hung fast
but images on my heart done cast