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angliholic
09-22-2010, 12:11 PM
My dear,
Do you know it's our Mid Autumn Festival today?
It's time for long-parted lovers to get united in romantic moonlight,
to eat mooncakes, round as the full moon,
sweet as the complete love,
and to gaze serenely up at the moon lady.

But I hate to confess
she is as coy as you are,
revealing her elegant face only after sunset!
And as you know,
I am a man of fervent spirit, like the star of day!

So I guess,
we're destined to long for each other all our lives
even on this beautiful Mid Autumn Festival!

dafydd manton
09-22-2010, 12:55 PM
Another one! Delicate, elegant, touching, moving, personal and very, very readable. Well don!

Skia
09-22-2010, 12:57 PM
Your work is as sweet as honey and is as touching as a crystal in the moonlight :)

angliholic
09-23-2010, 01:11 AM
Another one! Delicate, elegant, touching, moving, personal and very, very readable. Well don!

Thanks, Daffy, for your warmest feedback!
I'm learning from you,
and I think I'm progressing little by little!


Your work is as sweet as honey and is as touching as a crystal in the moonlight :)

Thanks, my dear Skia, for the sweet as honey and touching as a crytal comment!
I think your words are sweeter and more touching than my piece!
I love them!

aliengirl
09-23-2010, 02:53 PM
Thanks a lot Ang for this tender and moving piece! Daffyd has already used all the appropriate adjectives. I would only add that I feel honored and I treasure your friendship very much.

angliholic
09-24-2010, 02:18 AM
Thanks a lot Ang for this tender and moving piece! Daffyd has already used all the appropriate adjectives. I would only add that I feel honored and I treasure your friendship very much.

You're most welcome, AG.
As long as you like this piece,
I'm so happy
that I'd like to write one for you every day!