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dafydd manton
09-21-2010, 07:49 AM
This isn't a Poem by any stretch of the imagination, but it is part of a story that has been in part told on here, so I thought this would be the best place for it. You all put up with my meanderings, so I hope you don't mind. Anyway, I like being among friends.




A Parable.

Once, there was a man, an ordinary man, who had a model railway in his house. It had been built many years before, for some children that were now grown up with families of their own. One day, the man had time to kill, and he wandered in to a shop containing all the stuff that a model railway enthusiast could want. Brand new, miniature locomotives for over $200, way out of his reach. In a dusty corner was a box, with bits and pieces from way back when, just rubbish, really. In the bottom of the box was an old locomotive, once somebody's pride and joy, a very good model indeed, but now it was battered and scruffy, and not worth a second look. He parted with a very low sum - less than $10 - and took the engine home. Now this man loves looking after things, expecially tiny, delicate things, and he set to. He painstakingly cleaned it, every single part, removed all the care of the years, burnished it, took ages, but it started to look very good. He lubricated every single working part, delicately put it all back together, shining like it was new. The exterior was a mess, covered in dust and grime, the paint chipped from much usage. He took some cotton buds, and very, very carefully removed every single mark, so that the original colour shone through, then with the finest of paint brushes, he restored the gold markings, silvered what would be polished metal, covered the ravages of the years. The number on the side, 6237, was difficult, curved lines tend to be. After many days, and a lot of hard work, the locomotive was ready. It look every bit as good as new, better even, for he had added to it, despite the damage that time and a lack of care had wreaked on it. He was, to be honest, very proud, but this was the moment of truth. Sure, it looked fantastic, and it was a whole load better than it had ever been, but would it run? Would it work? Tentatively he applied some power, and the engine started to move, slowly but surely. With an increase in power, it ran as if it had never, ever been used before, eager, elegant, sure, dignified, magnificent. That engine was a success, and an absolute favourite.
Why am I telling you this? Well, that engine is six feet from my left hand right at this very second. It runs better than all the other stuff, looks better, is stronger, more striking and much more appreciated, because it was like a phoenix from the ashes. I am very fond of that engine.
If that can be done by one man, with a complex electrical model, that man has no doubt got the ability to mend other things, including a heart that needs attention. He is working on it, right this moment.

Maryd.
09-21-2010, 07:55 AM
Oh my Dave... This has left me speechless. That heart that you are giving attention to... is one very lucky heart.

dafydd manton
09-21-2010, 07:57 AM
Thanks Mary - you are very perceptive! I enjoyed writing it, and every word is perfectly true. And that engine still runs like a dream - like a big kid, I just tried it! Poetry in motion!

Maryd.
09-21-2010, 07:58 AM
Well if you can do that to one tiny engine... Wonder what you can do with one tiny heart.

zoolane
09-21-2010, 08:11 AM
:grouphug: to help mend your little heart and ring true that objects people consider rubbish is other man treasure. x

hillwalker
09-21-2010, 08:17 AM
Gulp..... the maestro of heart-string plucking strikes again

Haunted
09-21-2010, 09:04 AM
A very lucky heart indeed. But imagine the rewards!

dafydd manton
09-21-2010, 09:21 AM
Thanks, all of you, I appreciate it, greatly!!


Gulp..... the maestro of heart-string plucking strikes again

Sorry, Hill, I must have overlooked this comment earlier. I am indeed touched (in more ways than one), but I do appreciate the comment. Do let me know if I overdo it, won't you?

Hwyl fawr, Daf.

PrinceMyshkin
09-21-2010, 04:32 PM
Dafy! That was splendid! Who the [obscenity] cares whether it is formally poetry or not! Does the engine have a name as some of them do, I believe.

dafydd manton
09-21-2010, 04:43 PM
She does, Prince, the "City of Bristol", a streamlined locomotive of the London Midland and Scottish Railway, which my great grandfather, grandfather and mother all worked for. It does have a certain attachment, I have to say. For the record it is maroon, with gold stripes down locomotive and coal tender.

Maryd.
09-21-2010, 05:55 PM
You know Dave so patient to have even built the train. I would have lost the plot halfway through.

dafydd manton
09-21-2010, 05:59 PM
Truth to tell, I very nearly did! Fortunately, I seem to have this happy knack of cutting through the c*** and getting to the meat of the problem. In this case WD40! Simples!

Delta40
09-21-2010, 06:04 PM
its amazing what a bit of WD40 can do for the heart too!

Maryd.
09-21-2010, 06:04 PM
Ah good old fashioned WD40... I use it all the time

dafydd manton
09-21-2010, 06:06 PM
Tastes foul, though! Good for laryngitis, but tastes disgusting......

Maryd.
09-21-2010, 06:17 PM
Ah yes... But it works.

dafydd manton
09-21-2010, 06:20 PM
Next time I get arthritis, I'll bear it in mind!! The old knees do play up from time to time....!!!!

Maryd.
09-21-2010, 06:26 PM
Yes, mine too.

dafydd manton
09-21-2010, 06:28 PM
to be fair, whislk has the same effect but tastes a damn sight better!

Maryd.
09-21-2010, 06:38 PM
You drink your whisky... I have the WD40... Hahaha

dafydd manton
09-21-2010, 06:40 PM
Open wide while I have another spray!

Maryd.
09-21-2010, 07:24 PM
:drool5:

dafydd manton
09-21-2010, 07:32 PM
Keeps the old fangs shining, too!!!

Maryd.
09-21-2010, 07:45 PM
:D :lol: