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Delta40
09-10-2010, 04:13 PM
my whole life organised
into one handy book
jigsaw pieces of me
for anyone to look

My history laid out
including children and pets
whose names I write down
in case I forget

What makeup I like
and the pills that I take
my travel agents name
the size of my rake

Favourite websites
passwords and PINS
sports and hobbies
including naughty sex sins

Recorded here
for you to see
in case my red car
should hit a gum tree

You will know I'm insured
wearing pink panties
that my lipstick is rose
and my dogs name is Cervantes

dafydd manton
09-10-2010, 04:28 PM
Don't you find that the red and the pink clash? I just loved this one - it's fun, flirty, and bounces along beautifully. How do you think of this stuff so early in the morning?

Delta40
09-10-2010, 04:30 PM
its a gift really....:-)

dafydd manton
09-10-2010, 04:44 PM
That Vegemite is powerful stuff, if you ask me, kid!

Jerrybaldy
09-10-2010, 06:38 PM
This poem reminded me of something I read about having a mate arranged who, upon your death, has the duty of clearing your house of any errr.. toys mementos etc (you get the picture) that you wouldnt want your greiving loved ones to find. :D

angliholic
09-10-2010, 07:02 PM
my whole life organised
into one handy book
jigsaw pieces of me
for anyone to look
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Excellent beginning of a masterpiece!
I really love this one!
Thanks, Delta, for sharing!

Haunted
09-13-2010, 08:35 PM
I like it that you use rhyming techniques as a means of organization. As far as color and style choices, can you be more specific — petal pink or hot pink? bikini or throng?

Delta40
09-13-2010, 09:28 PM
lol. rose pink for sure