New

[zoolane]

Being on cloud 9,
new horizons on the way.
Excited adventures to have,
new people to met on way.

New things to learn & experience.
Great reading from famous authors,
new styles of writing & expressing myself.
That what cloud 9 is I think.

[hillwalker]

This poem bubbles over with enthusiasm - such good news if your life is changing for the better.

[dafydd manton]

Cloud 9 - a great place to be, and so bubbly with it!

[Delta40]

why cloud nine, I wonder? what is on cloud eight?

[zoolane]

Not sure what 'cloud 8' yet I will let you know. When and if I get here.

[Jerrybaldy]

Zoo
really enjoyed your poem.
For grammar the first verse would read better as:

Being on cloud 9,
new horizons on the way.
Exciting adventures to have,
new people to meet on the way.

the first line of the second verse should have 'to' as its third word. Its a great poem and I am glad you are on cloud nine.
best wishes
Jerry

[zoolane]

Thank you Jerry I know they are minor mistakes as usual. I need to get more written more and trip local library is in order try pick decent book to read.

Poem edited.