Oh! Autumn breeze

[angliholic]

Oh!
Autumn breeze,
while you're humming,
all the golden hair aspens are pulling up their skirts,
coyly revealing their long white legs,
and swaying gracefully to your intoxicating melody.

I'm not a man of wine or alcohol,
you know,
but my heart is drunk all the same,
and dancing with the bewitching scenery
you bring!

[adityasam]

Wow, What a scene. I Loved it, thanks for this!

[hillwalker]

I can picture the scene here, and your intoxication with the natural world - well done.

[dafydd manton]

I love the image of the aspen slowly pulling up its skirt to coyly reveal its legs! Fantastic. Thanks

[angliholic]

Wow, What a scene. I Loved it, thanks for this!
Thanks, Adi, for the wow feedback again!
It's an imaginative scene, and I'm amazed by your ability to picture it in your mind's eye!


I can picture the scene here, and your intoxication with the natural world - well done.
Thanks, Hillwalker, for the nice feedback!
I really appreciate every comment of yours!


I love the image of the aspen slowly pulling up its skirt to coyly reveal its legs! Fantastic. Thanks

Thanks, Daffy, for the nice words!

Now young girls everywhere are more and more thrifty when it comes to their dresses!
When the wind blows, the scenery is so beautiful that it'll give you a heart attack without fail everytime!
So, it's better to keep our windows of the souls on the natural beauty!
What do you think?

[Skia]

I LOVED this line

I'm not a man of wine or alcohol,
you know,
but my heart is drunk all the same,

That was truly an enjoyable read :) - Thanks again :)

[aliengirl]

Wonderful imagery! I can imagine the scene you depict so nicely. Thanks for this intoxicating and graceful poem.

[angliholic]

I LOVED this line

I'm not a man of wine or alcohol,
you know,
but my heart is drunk all the same,

That was truly an enjoyable read :) - Thanks again :)
Thanks, Skia, for the enjoyable feedback!
YOu're so kind to my scribbling though it's not good enough, I know!


Wonderful imagery! I can imagine the scene you depict so nicely. Thanks for this intoxicating and graceful poem.

Thanks, AG, for the wonderful feedback!

I wish you're doing well with your academic work!

[drago]

while you're humming,
all the golden hair aspens are pulling up their skirts,
coyly revealing their long white legs,



This line was amazing. I loved all of it. But this, specifically as well as you not being a fan of alcohol just seemed so. Perfect. I was impressed!

[Lumiere]

Unbridled enthusiasm is refreshing. It's the stuff in your poems.

[angliholic]

This line was amazing. I loved all of it. But this, specifically as well as you not being a fan of alcohol just seemed so. Perfect. I was impressed!

Thanks, Sarah, for the amazing feedback!
I'll keep on scribbling in response to your nice words!


Unbridled enthusiasm is refreshing. It's the stuff in your poems.

Thanks, Lumiere, for the unbridled-enthusiasm feedback!

I must admit my enthusiasm is really unbridled,
for I'm a lefty in real life and in thinking!