When fresh floral fragrances are floating in the air

[angliholic]

When floral fragrances are floating in the air,
I'll be waiting, my dear,
waiting for you in a world of maple trees.
I'm imagining
you are now stepping on the far side of the rainbow
of the colorful fallen leaves,
walking toward me.

From a fairy tale,
you're now walking toward me!

[hillwalker]

A very sweetly drawn image - I'm just a bit all ff-ed out by that ff-first line (rather too much alliteraton perhaps?).

[angliholic]

A very sweetly drawn image - I'm just a bit all ff-ed out by that ff-first line (rather too much alliteraton perhaps?).
Thanks, Hillwalker, for the sweet feedback.

I couldn't agree with you more on the too much alliteration!

Now I've deleted "fresh" to make it sound less ff?

Best regards,

[hillwalker]

ffine

[angliholic]

ffine
How ffantastic you are!

[Delta40]

mmm that sounds like me arriving with a thermos to have that coffee with you from your other poem!

[angliholic]

mmm that sounds like me arriving with a thermos to have that coffee with you from your other poem!

Thanks, Delta, for the nice coffee!
I can smell its faint fragrance now!

[adityasam]

Nice Poem Angli. Another WOW for you!

Regards

[angliholic]

Nice Poem Angli. Another WOW for you!

Regards

Thanks, Adi, for the wow feedback!

You must be very busy with your schoolwork now!

We miss you!

[aliengirl]

Sweet poem Angli. It has a fairy tale kind of dreaminess. Love it!

[angliholic]

Sweet poem Angli. It has a fairy tale kind of dreaminess. Love it!

Thanks, AG, for taking time out of your busy schedule to give me this sweet comment!

I really appreciate it!