Cool Love Calls

[Lamar Cole]

Half moon,
Brilliant stars,
The air is brisk.
Sweetheart's warm kiss.

A horse neighs.
Two lovers in the hay.
The coming of fall.
Cool love calls.

[Skia]

I Like that.
Very sweet, :)

[dafydd manton]

Oh, my lost youth......... Thanks!

[Delta40]

your poem has such brevity but is very sweet

[angliholic]

I simply love this piece, short but sweet!
It's a bit like Chinese poetry!

[Abras]

cool love calls? Well...that's not very exciting, is it?
What ever happened to hot sloppy love? -- the kind where you have to pull yourself off the floor and brush the hay off your backside before returning to work :D

[Skia]

the kind where you have to pull yourself off the floor and brush the hay off your backside before returning to work :D

^ Love doesn't have to be portrayed as hot and sexy and spicy, it can be portrayed as calm, sweet and sensual. :)

[dafydd manton]

cool love calls? Well...that's not very exciting, is it?
What ever happened to hot sloppy love? -- the kind where you have to pull yourself off the floor and brush the hay off your backside before returning to work :D

I'm no expert, I'm only 55, been around a little bit, but that sounds a bit more like lust. Not quite as satisfying and fulfilling. The poem is definitely a love poem, in the purest sense.

[Delta40]

cool love calls? Well...that's not very exciting, is it?
What ever happened to hot sloppy love? -- the kind where you have to pull yourself off the floor and brush the hay off your backside before returning to work :D

no doubt about it....there are all sorts of love....:party:

[Skia]

that sounds a bit more like lust. Not quite as satisfying and fulfilling. The poem is definitely a love poem, in the purest sense.

I Agree, I'm only 18, not been around as much, I know :P
But I agree with you definately. :)

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