Only a few dreams and a pen

[angliholic]

I don't know
whether the world is forgetting about me
or the other way around?

The only thing I'm sure is
I'm left with only a few dreams and a pen
in my traveler's package!

[dafydd manton]

Angli, one thing is for certain - as long as you have a pen, nobody is going to forget you. Not with work of this quality, they aren't.

[angliholic]

Angli, one thing is for certain - as long as you have a pen, nobody is going to forget you. Not with work of this quality, they aren't.

Thanks, Daffy, for the kind words.

All good things come to an end, even sweet dreams.
I know this very well!
Anyway, thank you for your sweet feedback!

[dafydd manton]

They may well come to an end, but that doesn't mean that you have to forget them.

[angliholic]

They may well come to an end, but that doesn't mean that you have to forget them.

You could say that again, Daffy!
But even when dreams are leaving me, I'm not very sure if I can still remember anything!

[dafydd manton]

The human mind is a briliant bit of kit - it tends to remember the good bits and filter out the bad. Stops you going mad, in the end. Don't worry!

[angliholic]

The human mind is a briliant bit of kit - it tends to remember the good bits and filter out the bad. Stops you going mad, in the end. Don't worry!

Thanks, Daffy, for the philosophical and poetic reply!
I adore that saying of yours!

[PrinceMyshkin]

Lovely poem, and the conjoining of dreams and a pen is wonderful.

[Skia]

I love this type of work,
unfortunatly, i can never produce lovely work like this.

Well done :)

[aliengirl]

I don't know
whether the world is forgetting about me
or the other way around?

The only thing I'm sure is
I'm left with only a few dreams and a pen
in my traveler's package!




You have said a lot in this short poem. It made me a little worried. But people can't forget you easily if you have a pen and such a wonderful imagination. And I think you can find a little bit of hope if you'll search in the side pocket of your traveler's package.
Wish you the best Angli! :)

[angliholic]

Lovely poem, and the conjoining of dreams and a pen is wonderful.

Thanks, Prince, for the wonderful feedback!
I always enjoy comments from you!



I love this type of work,
unfortunatly, i can never produce lovely work like this.

Well done :)
Thanks, Skia, for the lovely feedback!
The type of scribbling is very common in this part of the world.
This is the way we describe nature and our feelings and thoughts!


You have said a lot in this short poem. It made me a little worried. But people can't forget you easily if you have a pen and such a wonderful imagination. And I think you can find a little bit of hope if you'll search in the side pocket of your traveler's package.
Wish you the best Angli! :)
Thanks, AG, for your concern and nice feedback!
But don't worry!
I'm still breathing
though I'm left with not much!