Fall Foliage of a Maple Tree

[angliholic]

Do you still remember
when I was still a young breeze,
your heart was messed up
as the green leaves rustling in the air?
You said
you were too timidly shy
to dream beyond the blue mountain!

Only after
my passionate summer has passed,
you're starting
to put on the most gorgeous robe,
the time
my prime has drifted far away
with the spring!

[Delta40]

I like how your poems have some tacit implication of relationships other than just trees, flowers and stuff!

[PrinceMyshkin]

This has the loveliness of a freshly remembered dream!

[hillwalker]

A tender poem, about relationships and of course nature. I enjoyed this one, angli.

[dafydd manton]

Wonderful. Simply that!

[angliholic]

I like how your poems have some tacit implication of relationships other than just trees, flowers and stuff!

Thanks, Delta, for the tacit-implication feedback!
I really appreciate your comments!


This has the loveliness of a freshly remembered dream!
Thanks, Prince, for the dreamy comment!
I couldn't agree with you more-it's a freshly remembered dream!


A tender poem, about relationships and of course nature. I enjoyed this one, angli.
Thanks, Hillwalker, for the tender feedback!
Your comments are always heartily appreciated!


Wonderful. Simply that!

Thanks, daffy, for the wonderful feedback!