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Bastard Child
09-02-2010, 07:57 PM
Despite their cruel vicious verdict
That we were nothing but bums
And dropouts and ne’er-do-goods,
We knew ourselves, or sought to,
And found we were left out;
Always looking for the key,
Some distant long-neglected way
Through our fears, our dejection,
Our hopes and failures and ideals,
Both those we had outgrown
And those we’d half-cultivated
Through endless spaced-out hours
In some forgotten weed-filled park
Beneath the law’s mad crooked gaze.

At every crazy hour of the night
When hot reason seeks repose
And relinquishes her dominion
To freaks and bearded prophets,
There stood we in the afterglow
Of our fathers’ and mothers’ wishes,
Rebuilding the world from our dreams
And dreaming of strange, impossible
Things that are not dreamt of
In their philosophy, decrepit and old…
We were pioneers in a graveyard
Of culture, where faith’s long wings
Had dipped too early to recover,
And had fallen to her demise.

The standing of ghastly apparition
We’d inherited from the meek
Ere grave was dug or earth was filled
Served us in our purposes at least,
For our missions of vengeful sabotage
Against an establishment we felt
In no way represented the age
It professed to serve so ardently;
Week on week our party grew
And month on month we saw renewed
Our own determination to outgrow
The rank and stale file of scarecrows
Erected on this new field of battle
That saw brain and education matched.

An odd sense of pride filled our banner
As a new generation raised its head
Above the heavy stench that was
The final contribution of the eighties
Fully versed in arcane weaponry;
Abstract paintings, obscene poetry
And every manner of bold atrocity
Awakened from dreadful slumber
Full of angst and nervous energy,
To take the world with sudden force
And burst forth from a million souls
Into music so serene and beautiful
And lofty and hurt and spiteful,
No single solitary soul could bear it.

But when the tenor of our orchestra
Screamed through the blown speaker
Of a shotgun’s mouth and smeared
His tale across an entire nation’s breast
And bled his last words on a stage
Of personal torment, all sound died
In the ripple of some terrible shock,
That rumbled along each artery
And into every heart still beating,
With the force and speed of thunder
And the blinding flash of agony.
Entire galaxies were washed away
When our century’s brightest son
Gave way to our most somber day…

Disbanded now across the void,
Devoid of any purpose or meaning,
And wandering the great divide
With rucksacks from former days
Faded as any dream, worn, rough
To a touch grown callus and cold:
Old friendships, and enmities even,
Lay buried beneath countless layers
Of complacence and grimy greed
Whose oil fills up the old drums
Of the socio-political machine
With such determined consistence
No dawn swells the black horizon
With even the promise of newness.

Alexander III
09-03-2010, 10:15 AM
I didnt know Cobain wrote poetry he seemed much more musically minded, I mean raw music, melody and such, in fact he never considered his lyrics anything more than empty words used to fill a space and accompany the true art, the music.

LitNetIsGreat
09-03-2010, 06:49 PM
THAT is modern poetry - let no one EVER forget it...
Teach it in schools (actually, my 6th grade English teacher confidentially told us during class that if Cobain had kept up his writing he'd be the next Shakespeare)


What? Did your old teacher ever smell of gin?

OrphanPip
09-03-2010, 09:04 PM
I'm more amazed that 6th graders knew who Kurt Cobain was.

Delta40
09-03-2010, 09:27 PM
I don't know. these angry young men...

PrinceMyshkin
09-06-2010, 09:27 AM
I've only read your poem once so far, though it seems to require and to deserve several readings. There's a distant echo of "Howl" in it and of Baudelaire but, above all, there's your own strong, inimitable voice. Bravo!

Skia
09-06-2010, 12:21 PM
Fine Peice of work... Kurt Cobain was a True Artist... as is the Lyrical Genius whose lyrics I have Printed Below.

Take all of your wasted honor
Every little past frustration
Take all of your so-called problems,
Better put 'em in quotations

Say what you need to say

Walking like a one man army
Fighting with the shadows in your head
Living out the same old moment
Knowing you'd be better off instead,
If you could only . . .

Say what you need to say

Have no fear for giving in
Have no fear for giving over
You'd better know that in the end
Its better to say too much
Then never say what you need to say again

Even if your hands are shaking
And your faith is broken
Even as the eyes are closing
Do it with a heart wide open

Say what you need to say

Alexander III
09-06-2010, 01:05 PM
Ahh John Mayer, I find his lyrics rather lacking, it would be a great shame if here were to be remembered for his lyrics, his guitar work is rather amazing though.

Skia
09-06-2010, 01:56 PM
Love the Fact You know John Mayer..

I find his Lyrics to show passion and integrity.

His Guitar work shows true indignation,

Brava!

x

Alexander III
09-06-2010, 06:12 PM
Sorry to de-rail the thread but, Mayer's cover of Free Falling is a grand peice showing how his singing and guitar reinvents a song without changing a word, and his version is faaaaar better, though I have to admit the lyrics for Waiting On The World To Change are beautiful.

Skia
09-07-2010, 11:39 AM
I agree with you for Free Fallin'..
And Who Says Has grand lyrics :P
x

And yeah sorry for De-railing Thread. :P

Bastard Child
09-07-2010, 09:32 PM
I didnt know Cobain wrote poetry

An admittance of ignorance should not ever be used as any kind of claim to intelligence - which intention is here made obvious by your attempt at wittiness and which only belittles what intelligence you may have been deemed to possess at the onset...
Better, I say, to stick to what you know, which is obviously not Nirvana and Kurt Cobain's lyrics... (smily face-like, but with a twist of lemon)
But good for you that you enjoy the music...

Scheherazade
09-08-2010, 03:31 AM
R e m i n d e r

Please do not personalise your arguments.

If you are not willing to receive feedback (negative as well as positive), please refrain from posting in a public forum.

Alexander III
09-08-2010, 09:46 AM
An admittance of ignorance should not ever be used as any kind of claim to intelligence - which intention is here made obvious by your attempt at wittiness and which only belittles what intelligence you may have been deemed to possess at the onset...
Better, I say, to stick to what you know, which is obviously not Nirvana and Kurt Cobain's lyrics... (smily face-like, but with a twist of lemon)
But good for you that you enjoy the music...

Cobain himself stated that most of his lyrics are sub-par, of course you are free to believe what you wish, but your imagination cant alter reality, well it can alter yours, but rarely everyone else's. Il admit I do not know nirvana to well, but I do know to call their lyrics their sting point is like saying Shakspere's strong point was his plots...

I never used ignorance to make a claim of intelligence, quite clearly I separated the two , I admitted my ignorance of his poetry, but I do I have knowledge of his music, you failed to notice the distinction.

As for his poetry is it good, but nothing special, as far as rockstar poets go I find Jim Morrison's poems to be far better than Cobain's. Of course man would dispute that Morrison's poetry lacks, but I quite like it.

Do you wish to show that Cobain could have been the next Shakespeare, I mean it requires you using actual logical arguments...

Bastard Child
09-10-2010, 05:55 PM
your imagination cant alter reality, well it can alter yours, but rarely everyone else's.

I must admit, I laughed out loud at that one. Nicely said or nice last-minute save - either way. No, it isn't my intention to establish any kind of comparison between Shakespeare and Cobain, though it could be argued they both represented something in and about poetry that was perhaps needed for their respective times. I'll merely hint at the argument myself.
The comparison itself came from a learned old man trying to teach English literature to a bunch of young punks that knew everything yet cared little for learning anything, so perhaps it's all-too-understandable that he set out sifting through countless available examples of their tastes and interest to better understand and communicate with them; of course he eventually came across Nirvana and, with an English teacher's mind, found himself met with Cobain's lyrics; thinking them perhaps not as great as he let on when trying to get our attention, he found them at the very least worthy of his notice. I'm not saying even he that made the comparison believed it, except maybe as relative to his pupils, to a degree they could conceive and appreciate, but still that's quite a lot coming from such a learned mind - or at the very least says an unfortunate lot about what else was available :D
What I might just argue with you on though is this belief you have (and for all I know made up) that Cobain treated his lyrics and his approach to them carelessly, indifferently. No one could just stumble onto "Throw down your umbilical noose so I can climb right back" just like that, in the dark; even should that be possible - to stumble onto genius, which is possible for even the most simple-minded man - there's no way, given Cobain's sensibility and state of mind as well as his fascination with fetuses and death, that he could ever find himself unmoved by this combination of words - a combination so perfect in its simplicity and directness and powerful imagery...