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angliholic
09-02-2010, 12:20 AM
When Zephyr
stoops to gather yellow fallen leaves,
the more
he picks, the more he drops.

My dear,
Can't you see
it has already turned into a season
of maples,
and a season of sorrows?

Especially when you're not here
to collect those colorful dreams with me,
my heart wants to cry,
but I can't find a tear.

PrinceMyshkin
09-02-2010, 07:38 AM
I admire the elegiac quality of this.

angliholic
09-02-2010, 05:39 PM
Thanks, Prince, for your admirable feedback!

I appreciate your comment as always!